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La Ville de Feu - Comics by BlackMageAlodia La Ville de Feu - Comics by BlackMageAlodia
So cheesy!!! XD I like how this came out all warm and sepia-ish. But anyway, please go easy on me. I'm really not a comic artist. This is a home work I did for my comics class in school. I just did this in one night because I have more stuff to finish for my other classes; and art commissions. :c I need more time..T.T Mah, I might move it to my scraps later!

Gah! It's been a while since I used my tablet for coloring..

Pencils, layout & colors by: Me *blackmage9
Script by: Danielle San Pedro (my comics class classmate)


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0.5 F and 2B Mechanical Pencil
Adobe Photoshop CS3 for Colors
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:iconxxx97:
xXx97 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
kapoy basa part
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:iconxxx97:
xXx97 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2011
kapoy basa part
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:iconmisssybil:
MissSybil Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Professional General Artist
Don't sell yourself short.I really like it.
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fallofreach Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
like ur work blackmage9. I've got a 20page script that I need turned into a comic. *Just for fun*. Ur style is what I'm looking for. A title page and a full 20page book. Interested? If so message me and I'll send you over my script.

I've got links in television, prolly try to pitch it to someone in the near future.
cheers,
fallofreach
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:iconpierreshinigami:
PierreShinigami Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
i was looking for your manga miss alodia.. im so lucky i found this.! <3
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:iconsteelmullet:
Steelmullet Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Nice tones.
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:iconseastarsapphire:
SeaStarSapphire Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009  Student
AAAHHH!!!! NOO wat happens next!!!!???? plz dont leave it at that!!!! i sooo wanna kno wat happens
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:icongeraldturaray:
geraldTuraray Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
wewt! text overload! ahaha

the overall warm tone is very nice though :D
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:iconcosplaykid07:
cosplaykid07 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Student Digital Artist
wow...

this comic is so loveLy..
(just lyk the one who made it..hehehe^_^)

:D

very touching...
lol..:w00t:
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:iconalexeikazansky:
AlexeiKazansky Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2008
This must be the first time ever that I've seen good writing and good art together. Seriously. You should continue this work! :D
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:iconangel-wing101:
Angel-Wing101 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that is so sweet T^T good enough to be like... an anime or cartoon or something.. sweet!
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:iconfinex666:
finex666 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
i wish i can even do that. great work
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daviz84 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
hi
its a beautiful script..!
i think one way to give more space to the text would be to get rid of the bubbles - the "thinking bubbles" - that would also emphazise more that she is having those thoughts for herself only...
the warm colors work extremely well with the mood of the story..!
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remaru123 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
hahahahha. . .
this one's nice. . .
pls. dont scrap this thing!!
i want to know what's the next episode. . .
heheheh. .
LOL
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theoriginal-zero0000 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
This is like the ultimate "you want him to shut up then kiss him!" post!
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:iconbloodlustvlad:
bloodlustvlad Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
next page!next page!next page!! :XD:
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:iconladykyoshiro:
LaDyKyOsHiRo Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
oooohhh! I want to know what comes next!^^
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:iconastrocrush:
AstroCrush Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2007
:nod:
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:iconcortezmaronie:
cortezmaronie Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice =D
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Exotice1911 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, kinda makes me want to get back to my own artwork, which reminds me, I still have a comic of my own I need to color in.
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jehaldeman Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007  Professional Artisan Crafter
DO MORE~! DO MORE~! lol i love it!
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:iconbrokenquincy1:
brokenquincy1 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007
NYAHH!.. are you going to post the next page ? o.o;; eheh.
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:icontuksoil:
tuksoil Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
this homework looks like a project already..

jozuda na!! :clap:

:giggle:
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:iconstargaterick:
stargaterick Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2007
Like the sepia look, cheesy lines though.
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saverfang Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
wow...
nice...
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:iconsaverfang:
saverfang Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
wow...
nice...
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daruku-siiju Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
You did a nice paint job there. Love the "sepia-ish" colors. Yet I have to admit the script was quite tacky. :doh: Whoa! sorry for my frankness... and tactlessness. Gomen! Gomen! Gomen!
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XxKaT2008xX Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
thats super cute!! nice job!
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:iconyeytofu:
yeytofu Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
great job :aww: :thumbsup:
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:iconeepyaj07:
eepyaj07 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007  Professional Filmographer
i knew you can draw comics i hope to see more of these ^_^
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loki-aw Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2007
astig!! ang galing talaga! especially the colors... what course are you taking? i want to shift to your course! hehe :headbang: :headbang: :headbang:
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t0welz Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007
ROFL!! wat a guy, a girl stareing at you and you shout " HEY!!!" XD <3 romance ^^ lookforward to another :)
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:iconantarticus:
antarticus Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007
I could relate a little bit, but i just got busted, but i moved on easily
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darksage29 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
wow! very nice... I love the coloring... it's so great! :XD:
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ZuviosGemini Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
comic class???
lucky ducky...
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Naomi69 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007   Filmographer
wow, i really enjoy it and it makes me want more, but i know how it is for a homework assingment, cuz i had to do the same thing but i would never stick that up on here, its so bad and no matter how hard i want to do a comic i cant seem to but this is really good!
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:iconmikeabundo:
mikeabundo Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007
The guy looks like a punk Balthier.
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:iconryukataraku:
ryukataraku Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007
comic class!?cool!!XD
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5exer Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ugh! comic class *jealous* how fun would that be, and you get to collab w/ a writer. I want to go back to school jus b-cause of that :w00t: well...anyhow this is nice i lixe the foreshortening in 3 & 4

:+fav:
:jsenn:
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XxKurusai-chanxX Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007
The girl's cute and the ending is so mushy-gushy. Love it!
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:iconianar:
iANAR Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007
This way better than my old comic class piece. :) My only comment though is that you got a lot of typos.
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:iconbustercloud:
bustercloud Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
wow!!! very nice!! :bounce:
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Cklaighe Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
very nice camera shots. ^^

if this is printed to the standard indie comic size, the text would be very small. i dont know how but i think you can spread the panels to two pages. tapos tulad ng nasabi ni kuya jonas. masmaganda kung yung dialogue boxes ay ginawa sa photoshop.

Keep it up. :)
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gOnzOsInK Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007
Did anyone Edit this? Take CAR of me. Great Page does garbage face have a name? is that her nick name that he called her since they first met, kinda like Jay who called his girl BOOBOOT**YF*C*......Next page...OK She needs to snap out of daydreaming everytime they walk that path. What is it with girls digging pricks, it's so common. You did a great job for one day, im working on one too a superman page and im not a good drawer but i do have more than one day to work on it. I think it might not look as good as yours :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
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yoru-no-chou Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007
I would have punch that guy already if I were the girl.
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AndySerrano Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Now I want to see the next page!!!
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:iconrollinghair:
rollinghair Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
I would have hit him right on his nose.. =___=

"Do i have something on my face?"
"yes, wait one moment.."
*punch*


Btw nice work! ^^
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ricey Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Not too shabby! There are a few spelling errors... hehe

But the artwork is pretty great!

Only suggestion is maybe to make panel 5 flow into panel 6 a little better, but then, panel 6 kinda takes you by surprise the way it is now... hmm, I dunno.
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theelfhybrid Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Reiji-kun said it before me. The typos are;
"even for N airhead like you" , "take CAR of me" (same panel) and in same bubble, next panel "YouU" and "fore".

The colours are lovely, love the sceme, it makes it warm and melancholy at the same time.
The one thing, drawing-wise I didn't like, was how the guy poses in panel 2, it's too action-manga-ish for me. It's sort of a violent, shouting pose, in my eyes. Anyways.

I don't think it's bad at all, and for a first try, it's great.

And whoever said that they can't "feel" the chara's, I have to respectfully disagree. I could totally feel her.

One thing I really like, was the angle in panels 1, and the last two :) :)

Good job!
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kuroaloeart Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007
where is the rest????
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